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Date: 14 May 2009 21:41 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mudita88.livejournal.com
Wah...I'm disappointed that this sestina isn't actually a sestina, since the concluding line of each stanza is not a permutation of the same 6 words (let alone the CORRECT permutation).

ref http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sestina

But it's a cool idea, and a nice layout...

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Date: 14 May 2009 21:53 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jrtom.livejournal.com
I haven't checked the correctness of the permutation, but the set of words used to conclude lines (i.e., {form, symmetries, sestina, six, group, permutations}) appears to be the same for all stanzas--where does it fail to do that?

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Date: 14 May 2009 22:16 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mudita88.livejournal.com
Ohhhh...I misunderstood the form! I was thinking the last line of each stanza was to have the same 6 words in the permutations...

Please replace my disappointment with a blend of chagrin and utter delight!!!

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Date: 14 May 2009 22:23 (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jrtom.livejournal.com
A replacement--at least in the latter aspect--that I'm always happy to make. :)

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